Today's poem is an ode to Emily Dickinson's "The Soul Has Bandaged Moments"
In those bandaged moments,
Where the edges of life are bright with promise,
Pink inflamed with joy.
That’s where I want to live.
Not in my wallowing,
Days that drag,
So low that,
Finding the right thoroughfare,
Seems intolerable.
That’s when I need,
Words and stories,
The mantle of other's triumphs,
The mantle of other's triumphs,
To activate an explosive dance.
And remind that,
I carry within myself,
A custom-made first aid kit.
©2013 Juliet Bond all rights reserved
That's a nice idea - 'a custom-made first aid kit', and oh, so true :)
ReplyDeleteYou have to find your own, right?
ReplyDeleteI am loving this series.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Ann!
ReplyDeleteThis flowed really well and brought to the surface strength and emotion. I enjoyed this very much, truly. Good job, Juliet! (:
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind, Elise :)
DeleteA custom made first aid kit. How perfect!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Megan.
DeleteThanks for pointing me in the direction of your blog. Your poetry is wonderful!!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you stopped by, Cheryl!
Deletewhat a lovely ode to Dickinson. I was always fascinated by her solitary ways, especially as I went to college at Amherst, the town she lived in. I think I could easily follow her footsteps and never leave my writing room:) thanks for coming by my blog. Now I better get on to that E myself!
ReplyDeleteSandra, I so enjoyed reading your blog. Original short stories are often such a pleasure when they work and yours did!
DeleteThis makes me want to go write an ode to one of my favorite poets! Thanks for the gorgeous inspiration!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, Gort! Just brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks Claudia! This one is mine (Juliet) but Gina IS brilliant.
DeleteLovely - an ode to resources both external and internal.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my blog! I'm delighted to return the favor.
Thanks!
DeleteAnother beautiful poem...
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind :)
Delete"That’s when I need,
ReplyDeleteWords and stories,
The mantle of other's triumphs,
To activate an explosive dance.
And remind that,
I carry within myself,
A custom-made first aid kit."
I need more of your poetry, Miss Juliet!
You are going to get it, girl. 14 more?
DeleteLove the hopeful spirit in this! A great perspective to have in life!
ReplyDeleteIt's funny, Gina and I were talking about how some of the poems we composed were cheerful and others very deep. Sunday's poem is downright silly.
DeleteAware of depression and seeking to get out of it. Very good!
ReplyDeleteKatie atBankerchick Scratchings
Thank you. Always looking for the inner bandaid.
DeletePure genius!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is great but what I'm going to do right now is try to jump like that. It looks like fun and kind of liberating.
ReplyDeleteRight?
DeleteI like it...a reminder that we all have the inner strength to get through things.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mark
DeleteLove that last line. Another beautiful piece. :)
ReplyDeleteWe just need a little jump start with our inner motivation!
ReplyDeletePerfect comment, Alex.
DeleteJust returning your visit through the A to Z challenge. What a beautiful poem and so inspiring, thank you :)
ReplyDeleteNaomi @ Cornet Crafts
Thanks for returning. I'll return to yours too!
Delete"A custom-made first aid kit"
ReplyDeleteLove it!
Thanks, Kelly!
DeleteI love it! :D
ReplyDeleteGracias!
DeleteWonderful! New follower here. I'm stopping by on the "A to Z" challenge and I look forward to visiting again.
ReplyDeleteSylvia
http://www.writinginwonderland.blogspot.com/
So kind of you to follow. We will return the favor.
DeleteBeautiful! Soothe yourself with words. Sometimes those down days make us more appreciative of the up ones, so we need to put them in their proper place & not let them drag us down.
ReplyDeleteThat's right! Love you :)
DeleteA lovely reminder that we can always look to literature for a better understanding of ourselves and the world around us.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dawn.
DeleteSuch a lovely idea for an A-Z theme! Looking forward to the rest of the poem series.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Deniz!
DeleteLovely! Visiting from the A to Z Challenge.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you stopped by!
DeleteLove that love that love that. Thanks you. I had a horrible day and this is exactly what I needed to read.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad to have spread a little hope. Hang in there.
DeleteIt's been a poem-filled day for this guy :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is kinda like it's own "custom-made first-aid kit" for blog-reading burnout.
Thanks for the balm, Juliet.
You rock! Thanks for the fabulous compliment.
DeleteShe was such an amazing talent, and I especially love the last line of this one.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit. It's great to meet you both and discover your blog.
xoRobyn
Thanks!
DeleteWonderful poem. It was the end I liked best: And remind that,
ReplyDeleteI carry within myself,
A custom-made first aid kit.
Thanks for checking out my AtoZ.
Rhonda @Laugh-Quotes.com
AtoZ #42
Thanks, Rhonda. We will be back to yours!
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vik! We are putting the small things on hold this month (laid down at the alter of poetry.) We will be back at it in May!
DeleteWonderful poem--beginning to end. I too like the idea of carrying a custom-made first aid kit. I may need to borrow that idea at times.
ReplyDeleteBorrow away!
DeleteThank you!
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