For the A-Z challenge, we decided to post a new and original poem every day (yipes!) Today, inspired by a Jane Yolen poem, Juliet tackles the letter "G."
The
Grimm
In
a moss-covered room,
She
sweeps the grime from the Grimm.
When
the men come home,
they
track in wet sludge, stiffened crisps of fallen leaves,
black ash from the
mines.
She sweeps the grime from the Grimm.
After
she eats the poison,
Their stumpy old hands will trap her in a clear box,
to
admire.
Marriage
will be her only escape.
So
that is what she dreams of.
When
it finally comes,
it
wears tight pants and plants kisses on her,
disenchanted lips.
disenchanted lips.
But
in the end,
The
palace walls draw as close as any crystal box.
There
is more than one way to get stuck,
And so the Fairy Tale continues.
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing...fun read...perfect photo.
Thanks for your visit.
Sue CollectInTexasGal
AtoZ LoneStar Quilting Bee
Thanks, Sue!
DeleteI have zero talent when it comes to poetry. I leave that to my daughter. Of course, being 17, most of it is about the rain in her empty soul.
ReplyDeleteDropping in from A to Z Challenge. It's my first year participating.
Brett Minor
Transformed Nonconformist
Ah, yes. I have a 15 year old. His soul is also devoid of anything but storm clouds, pain and a list of complaints about homework.
DeleteI am SOOOO in love with this! Gorgeous imagery and humor to boot!
ReplyDeleteKate, you are a doll!
DeleteOoooh, so dark; I love it! Good luck with the rest of your A-Z.
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Thanks, Angeline.
DeleteOkay, this breaks the illusion of the happily ever after, hahahaha. Great!
ReplyDeleteI've been with my husband for a very long time and I am happily married but I do believe that my expectations were a bit high going in...
DeleteI love dark pieces and this really fits the bill. Very haunting.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julie.
DeleteI love your poem and your clever observation about different ways to be trapped. Repaying your visit from A to Z.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Wendy.
DeleteNice imagery. that's a challenge all the way to Z for sure! Thanks for stopping by! GirlZombieAuthors
ReplyDeleteThank you! I love the name of your blog!
DeleteI love it!! I can write an entire novel, but poetry scares me to death. Never been very good at it, but I sure appreciate the talent. Best of luck for the rest of the challenge. You two rock!
ReplyDeleteHow kind, Nancy. I enjoyed visiting your blog this morning.
DeleteThat's an interesting twist on the old tale. Love that picture.
ReplyDeleteLee
An A to Z Co-Host
Tossing It Out
Thanks, Arlee!
DeleteNice poem! The last line is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteSweeping the Grime. I like that!
ReplyDeleteKaTy Did at: Life's Ride As I See It
A-Z Challenge
Thanks KT!
DeleteYou guys are both awesome. Sweeping the grime from Grimm indeed.
ReplyDeleteYou, my dear, are the awesomist!
DeleteMy favorite poem so far! Dispels the myth of happily ever after. But one can be happy with the Grimm as long as one's eyes are open to the possibilities.
ReplyDeleteAin't that the truth!?
DeleteLove this! :)
ReplyDeleteHappy G Day!
tm
Thanks tm!
DeleteHello, Regina and Juliet! This is a wonderful poem. I'm loving your theme for the Challenge! It's perfect for National Poetry Month, too.
ReplyDeleteHappy A to Z-ing! from Laura Marcella @ Wavy Lines
Thanks, Laura!
DeleteThis was great, and I love the attached picture. Happily ever after isn't all she thinks it is.
ReplyDeleteKatie atBankerchick Scratchings
Thanks Katie! You got it ;)
DeleteCute!
ReplyDeleteCute, very cute! I think I'd rather be the princess, so I can have others to do the work for me if I'm so inclined... (nose in the air!) Ha ha! Fun, and thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment. Love the quote too, seemed to be perfect for this protagonist in this story... Have fun A to Z-ing it!
ReplyDeleteThanks. Er, do you mean the poem? I wrote the poem.
DeleteBTW, I pinned your blog!
ReplyDeleteThanks! High praise:)
DeleteReturning the visit,interesting take on the fairy tale in poetry form.
ReplyDeleteLucy from Lucy's Reality
Thanks, Lucy.
DeleteFor some, I guess, the 'fairy tell' doesn't have a happy ending :)
ReplyDeleteI think "happy" is such a complicated concept.
DeleteThat picture is so perfect for the poem! I like how it adds a light bit of humor to the otherwise dark content. Very nice!
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Thanks so much Kristen.
DeleteGreat poem.
ReplyDeleteI've never tried my hand at poetry, but I like reading it.
Thanks Suzi.
Deletevery nice....I almost chose Grimm as my topic for today too. Wonderfully done.
ReplyDeleteCool! I haven't come across another "Grimm" yet.
DeleteI have been having fun investigating your blog and I really like it. I'm your newest follower, and thank you so much for stopping by to say hello earlier today.
ReplyDeleteKathy M.
Wow, thanks so much!
DeleteWow! What a day! Great poem again, Juliet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, honey!
DeleteGreat poem! I am absolutely rubbish at writing poetry so I have great respect for those of you that can!
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You are very brave to write a poem every day. The picture to go with today's poem is exactly what I envisioned whilst reading it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Claire!
DeleteReally enjoyed that, thanks, and happy A to Z.
ReplyDeletemaggie winter
Thanks, Maggie!
DeleteThis was so good. Poor Snow. I guess the moral to this story is, never marry a guy in tights. :D
ReplyDeleteA good rule for life.
DeleteI loved this! And your other posts. Beautiful poetry. Wish I had the same knack for it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Andi!
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