Friday, July 5, 2013

Friday Original Poem

David

The world sore from the loss of your promise
A hollow, ringing sound as a gust
Blows through
Cold inside bones like
Blue slushies, Eye of the Tiger and the
Knee-high sweat socks that
Mothers dressed their 1970’s boys in
That baby seat,
And abandoned rainbow-colored toy
A sort of celebration and
The worst kind of goodbye


4 comments:

  1. Yes. That is loss. You captured it.

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  2. The worst kind of goodbye

    That says it all.

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  3. Loss is such a sad subject to write about, sadder still to live with. Sending much love to help heal.

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  4. The worst kind of goodbye, how very, very sad ~ those words....

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