For the A-Z challenge, we decided to post a new and original poem every day. Today is Regina's birthday and she writes about hair for the letter "H".
The Importance of Hair
At sixteen
I cut off my hair.
Long locks of
obedience fell to
the floor without reverence.
Not content to be
my father's daughter
at Bible study,
I went out on the town.
Rebellious he shouted,
certain my future
was damned.
But this, my first stand,
forged me. Samson braced
against crumbling columns,
without regret.
Strong is as strong does.
Defiant could no longer
define me, strength could.
A wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteWishing you a very happy birthday!
Thanks, Sarah.
DeleteYou know how much I love this one :) Happy birthday my sweet friend. In my life, you have been an amazing gift.
ReplyDeleteThis is still a first draft. It made me cringe a bit when I posted it. But it's all a process and someday I'll get to revise it. Thank you for this great adventure, Juliet!
DeleteLove this poem !!! Enjoy your day - happy birthday
ReplyDeleteThanks, LuAnn!
DeleteHappy Birthday. Are you a preacher's kid? Rebellion at 16 who knew? Well done.
ReplyDeleteKatie atBankerchick Scratchings
I am a preacher's kid. And yes those stereotypes apply to me. you know the ones about the black sheep wild child, that was me :)
DeleteNice poem and I hope you have a great birthday! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mark!
DeleteEnjoyed this very much! Have a wonderful birthday!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the birthday wishes!
DeleteHappy Birthday! Wonderful poem Regina, packed with a lot of emotional power.
ReplyDeleteI knew quite a few PK's growing up. They tend to get quite a reputation, know matter how good or bad the choices they make are. With all those eyes watching them, they don't seem to stand much of a chance. Not a position I have ever envied or wanted to be placed in :)
Thank you!
DeletePowerful poem of strength! Happy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by to read it :)
DeleteHappy birthday, Regina! Lovely poem!
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Thanks so much!
DeleteHappy Birthday! I wish we had a picture of that haircut to go along with this :)
ReplyDeleteHere is a link to this poem when i first posted it along with a a pic!
Deletehttp://swaggerwriters.blogspot.com/2012/10/sixteen.html
Happy Birthday! The last two lines are so insightful, I wish many teenagers would read them. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Inger.
DeleteAnother powerful poem. Happy Birthday to you, Regina!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Julie!
DeleteAnother beautiful one...A month of Blog...
ReplyDeleteThanks for coming back to read more :)
DeleteHappy birthday and that's a powerful poem. :)
ReplyDelete- A fellow blogger from A to Z!
Thank you!
DeleteHappy birthday, dear friend! You have certainly needed that strength over the years. Good thing you forged it young.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kathy! It's so nice when you come over for a visit. Makes me smile :)
DeleteHappy Birthday. Great poem! Visiting from the A-Z.
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Glad you stopped by :)
DeleteRegina, have a very happy birthday! lots of blessings to you. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Al!
DeleteAnother good poem. I'm enjoying your blog. And I see it's your birthday--hope it's fabulous!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you are enjoying our blog. It's been a lot of fun!
Deletevery nice....I love the last line. Happy birthday!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Julia!
DeleteNice poem. I like how u related the girl to Samson.
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DeleteLove the imagery in the poem. This is my first visit here. Nice to meet you.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping in and we hope to see you again!
DeleteAwesome poem, and happy birthday!
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DeleteHappy Birthday, great poem! Thanks for stopping by this morning! =)
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday one more time! I loved the poem, especially that evocative image that has you cutting your hair. What a transition to move from being "daddy's girl" to being your own person! From strength to strength.
ReplyDeleteU know these lines can apply for many teens across the world...
ReplyDeleteWhat a strong and beautiful poem! I just read a book (women's fiction) you might want to check out entitled The Wisdom of Hair, by Kim Boykin... similar subject matter. :) Amazing how changing your hair can feel so empowering!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your A to Z journey!
Jess / Blogging on the Brink
I love this topic and kudos to you! I don't think I could do one poem, let alone an alphabet!
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